2011년 1월 10일 월요일

Smoke makes us dying!

Hello! I'm Angella, Jang Min Kyung in class 22. Welcome to my blog and I'll start my essay.


(Sorry -_-;;)

Smoking must be stopped. However a lot of people "enjoy" to smoke themselves. If the government announce they will raise the price of cigarettes, they refute that cigarettes make them solve stress and keep mind happy. Also, they say they can't live without cigarettes because of problems of prohibition.
 Recently, the government raised the expense of the cigarettes, however, people still buy this. I can not understand that why people are smoking. Smoking is definitely not good for our health.
 So, why is it bad for our health? When you smoke, your lungs will be polluted. Also, there are some bad chemicals that are in asphalt, so when you smoke, it will be like drinking asphalt. Additionally, you can have cancer in every departments, not only for lungs. You would smell and people won't want to go next to you.
 People want to stop smkoing, however, it has a strong addict that makes people keep. Smoking people decide to stop smoking everytime, however if they have will to stop they would, so many people who don't like smoke smell and company keep making electronic cigarette.
 Cigarettes can get you advocated to smoking. For example, I remember a chane in my neighbor. He first just said it was for fun, but soon, his house became stinky, as well as his clohtes. He didn't just do smoking, he also got drunk, too. H ave witnesses a change of what drugs are do. He got fired from a very good job, and soon became poor. I remember they day he moved out, a cigarette in his mouth, with is brother, a clean business man. I  never saw him again.
 This story shows that cigarettes are bad for our health. However, people smoke even though they know this fact. Why? Because at first, they think it's for fun, to be cool. However, they get addicted to it. To the people weho had read this essay, I really hope that they stop smoking even though it is very hard to stop smoking, think about hour health and who others around you. Even if you won't be able to stop it completely, just remember as you smoke more and more you body is dying.

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